Lucretia Toepke
Monday, November 14, 2011
How does the first 6 pages of my book sound? PLEASE READ!?
pretty good. Intro is sorta short though. You should add more. Kinda sounds a tiny bit like twilight because of the hot guy, even if his name is jacob.
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